!ts amazing how once in a while
4 no reasons we get reasons2 smile
@ moment b4 who was stranger
No longer seems to be a stranger
His presence adds a dash of colour to life
Whose little gestures makes us feel shy
!ts amazing how once in a while
Sum1 makes dreams & reality look alike
We hold on to time but it slips away
We start wondering how to make him stay
Still confused wat we feel & how to wanna say
Looking here & there for little ray
!ts amazing how once in a while
Everything around starts looking worthwhile
The first tryst becomes the unforgettable memory
Soon starts a historic love story
Its destiny, hearts were destined to meet
Even angels are waiting for you to greet
!ts amazing how once in a while
We njoy even walking for miles
And comes a moment,
A moment to admire, reflect & believe
4 hearts to be open, to give & receive
4 making things special, for doing loving deeds
4 offering love that sum1 really needs
!ts amazing how once in a while
4 no reasons we get reasons to smile
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40 comments:
too good .. simple but elegant !
i am sure many of us would be able to relate to such a wonderful emotional poetry ..
My Goodness...
Wat wonderful way of expressing ur emotions..
Creative as i always say she is.!!
Keep goin.
SIMPLY AMAZING........!!!!
I claim that i am your first fan... :-)
you are a marvelous writer full of die heart emotions...
so, in order to hear more from you and encourage you, i small title for you..
LITTLE ANGEL
Good poem, Lil Angel!
I loved it.
Thank you.
we should publish it in ICAI newspaper
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hey ishu..so finally the blog is there..i feel so honoured to have finally coaxed you into this field..welcome and keep enriching our ideas with your wonderful posts
i was always an collector and fan of your cards bcoz of ur poetry, you know that i usually wait for the occasion and use to call u demanding my greetings. this is the reason u r such a gr8 poet. dear u havent give me card for last 6 occasions, but this poet has compensated every thing. keep going dear . it is best. and if something else is best, it is better than best.
awesome....
Gr88888888...
Good work...little bit of polising still required...
only 1 word to praise it is "fantabulous".
it's just wow........i luved it..
awesome,
marvellous,
and I feel the poetess has fallen in love.
a gr8 poet in the making.........
its amazingggggggggggggg ...
never knew u wr also a poet sweety...
its truly well written.BRAVO.apparently very simple but invokes deep thoughts.We should think on these lines Once in a while.
hice poem Ishu, nice to know a soft and romantic side of you.Wish you have lots of reasons to smile for no reason! :-)
Hi Ishu,
Lovely expression of feelings. Nice to see a softer and romantic side of yours. May u have lots of reasons to smile for no reason! :-)
Hi Ishu,
Lovely expression of feelings. Nice to see a softer and romantic side of yours. May u have lots of reasons to smile for no reason! :-)
Hi Ishu,
Lovely expression of feelings. Nice to see a softer and romantic side of yours. May u have lots of reasons to smile for no reason! :-)
well expressed emotions, its so imaginative,gud job!!!
outstanding....
i m sure my list for u is never going to end...the list will never hav a full stop...i have to keep giving commas 4 u...there is alwaz sumthing or the other for u to add in my list..i guess ur profile is got to b of atleast three to five pages..gud going..
so next tym i meet u..i got to hear sumthing frm u..for sure!
good luck!
Ishu, its abs amazing,,,,wonderful imagination,,,,beautifully crafted and elegantly displayed,,,,,once it starts we get involved so deeply that we never know wen it gets over,,,,yeah theres always someone special who make dream and reality look alike,,,,we do wanna hold on to time at those moments,,,,and we do keep looking here and there for little ray,,,,good one dear,,,,,keep poeting
well your poem starts as "ts amazing how once in a while
4 no reasons we get reasons to smile" You surely gave me a reason to smile with your poem ..GR8 work ..straight n not too flowery ...just right ..keep it up!!
its a very beautiful poem full of feelings.
it is good ..no doubt...but then...all these comments are forceful.....she just wants to accumulate more dollars into her account so that she can redeem them....convert them into rupees and give us a grand treat(which is very unlikely).....so I request u all ...not to post ur comments....n even if u do....get a contract signed for the treat......
IT is a Million-Dollar Poem so if she gets few bugs for this it is fair .So, Nikhil we should write more comments for her . Anyways once more I should say Hats Off to you IShu(isH...)Great Work.....
;;;; By the way It is Not forceful Comments Nikhil;;;;;
:)
AMAZING description of feelings and emotions ....u def hve a knack of expressing urself quite succintly in the most passionate way. writing that comes straight from the heart.
this is really nice.........and u know tht this is nice if i m telling it.
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!It's a simply superb and mindblowing poem.
Its amazing and fanfastic.
One of the most heart-touching poem.Too Good.
Keep it up.
With Smile.
Vivek Singhania
its good one. I never knew she can do it so well. the contents were well thought n arranged. hope to see such good work again in future.
hey,
It is too good, but I don't find it interesting.
hey this is my comment.
Hi Ishu,
Yeh kya tha..!
Shoib Akhtar ka Bouncer ya Bret Lee ka nyway jo bhi tha mast tha bole to ekdum jhakaas.Yaar itna saara gyan kya karogi..kuch mere ko bhi de do.......yaar n juz wait for my blog now..
its amazingggggggggggggg ...
lovely writing....................
ur superfluous thots in simple words,thats wat i lik.............
Keep it up dear....
a gr8 poet in the making.........
WOW!! Great one.. i dont have words to explain... It just reflects ones inner feelings... great going.. i am eager to read a few more..
wat happened why the poems has stopped
Nice content, Keep it up. Thanks for sharing.
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